Pokemon PurePink

[CrystalMarina]

This looks like it will be fun! Glad to see I'm not the only girl here who is interested in hacking, I don't feel so much like the odd person out now

[MikaruMenoko]

Originally Posted by CrystalMarina

This looks like it will be fun! Glad to see I'm not the only girl here who is interested in hacking, I don't feel so much like the odd person out now

Yaaaay! GRRRRL powah!

[CrystalMarina]

Originally Posted by MikaruMenoko

Yaaaay! GRRRRL powah!

Woohoo! :3

[MikaruMenoko]

Originally Posted by Mr.Soda

Alright, I like the general idea and theme of this hack, but I have a small issue in terms of storytelling; I feel that you villains are, for the lack of a better word, underdeveloped. This hack seems to want to tackle a serious issue, which I totally support, because I am an advocate of the idea that serious issues can be boarded by videogames, but the antagonists motivation seems lacking; let me tell you why I think so.

Your heroine will be as good as the chemistry she has with her antagonists. When making the villains I suggest you to keep these three questions in mind:
-Who are/is the antagonist(s)
-Why are they doing what they do
-Why do they clash with the main character
Lets apply it to N, one of my favorite antagonists of the series:
-N
-He wants to liberate pokemon and create a world or them
-Because he is baffled by the fact that you are kind and your pokemon love you.

The problem I have with your villains is that their motivation seems very childish, I suggest looking why do people that believe in things like this in real life do so. Maybe it would work better if their motivation isn't to eradicate feminine creatures, but rather, to oppress them. Maybe something like this:

"We want to stop female creatures, both human and pokemon. why? Because they are inferior and have no place in the roles of the males. Their only purpose is for bearing children and nurturing them. That is why you better stay out of our way"

Maybe you should look into real life people with this mindset and their reasoning, that would make for much believable villains. I hope you can take this in a constructive manner, and good luck with your project.

I was thinking about something like this.
Spoiler alert.

Spoiler:

The heroine will meet Team Xeno guided by the cry of a Lapras (the one who dreamt during the night spent with her best friend).
The Lapras will guide the heroine into a cave where some Team Xeno grunts are studying and torturing it. Then, the heroine will take the Lapras away from them by fighting. This is how I planned to make the first encounter with Team Xeno.

"We want to stop female creatures, both human and pokemon. why? Because they are inferior and have no place in the roles of the males. Their only purpose is for bearing children and nurturing them. That is why you better stay out of our way"

This is also something I was planning. The heroine will get frustrated by phrases like this, and will become more powerful to beat them hard.
Anyway, thanks for the ideas, I'll keep them in mind when I will develop Team Xeno's personality.

[MikaruMenoko]

Now I'm editing the battle-screen palatte. Any suggestions?
(I know, the shadow of the opponent Pokémon needs to be fixed).



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[MercuryShadowScizor]

Very adorable hack so far, young miss! I like the idea and concept of it and although I did see a spelling error or so in there, it's looks very well managed. I'll be watching out for this one and if you need any help at all, please don't hesitate to let me know!

Also made this for you:

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p320/SuperShadowPrince/PurePink_Banner.png

[MikaruMenoko]

Originally Posted by MercuryShadowScizor

Very adorable hack so far, young miss! I like the idea and concept of it and although I did see a spelling error or so in there, it's looks very well managed. I'll be watching out for this one and if you need any help at all, please don't hesitate to let me know!

Also made this for you:

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p320/SuperShadowPrince/PurePink_Banner.png

Well, thank you! *^* it's beautiful!
Hm? Spelling errors? Where? (Sorry about that, I'm not an english native speaker).

[MercuryShadowScizor]

The only one that I had noticed was "pijamas". The proper spelling is pajamas.

Location:

Spoiler:

When Professor Ashley mentions the sleep over.

[MikaruMenoko]

Fixed, thanks =)

Spoiler:

[Xanathos]

This game looks very original. The title screen is amazing and well-made.

Keep up! I support you =)