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Old 19th January 2012, 06:02 PM   #1
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For a long time I have looked to many different pok?mon hacks. I have seen many storylines, many new pok?mon, many script, many ways to make a hack. Now it was time to make my own hack.....

Pokémon Mystery Version

General Information

Hack Name: Pokémon Mystery Version
Hack Base: Pokémon Fire Red (US)
Hack Language: English

NOTE:
Yes, it's a new region, but the whole story start in Pallet Town! That's why the lab is the same as in Fire Red (ectually the whole first town is the same. After that everything is different from Fire Red).

Storyline

It's morning when you wake up in the Piron Region. Today is a big day because you become a real pok?mon trainer! When you got your starter pok?mon (Turtwig, Piplup or Chimchar), and when you have met your rival it's time to start! Of course you want to defeat all the Gym Leaders and the Elite 4, but this isn't gonna be easy. There is a team that steals pok?mon and they want your starter! It's Team Rocket. You must defeat Team Rocket to defeat the Gym Leaders and Elite 4 to become the best pok?mon trainer of the whole Piron Region. Also there are a few new pok?mon in this region and some legendary pok?mon are realy mad. Professor Oak doesn't know what this means... Are you gonna find out? Play Pokémon Mystery Version!

Features and New Stuff

- A whole new region: The Piron Region, with new maps etc. (4% done)
- Many new scripts, maps and sprites (5% done)
- New events with legendary pok?mon (0% done)
- New pok?mon from the 4th generation (100% done)
- New gyms with new pok?mon (0% done)
- New trainers/trainersprites (0% done)
- New male hero (100% done)

*This list is incomplete, there are coming more new functions!

Screenshots

It's possible that some of this screenshots are not in the newest alpha or beta versions, than they are from older alpha or beta versions.
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Bugs

Until now there are no bugs.

FAQ

How can I go in the cave by Torkon City?
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1. Go to the Torkon City market. You will get Oak's Parcel.
2. Go back to the lab and talk to porfessor Oak.
3. Now go to the route left from Torkon City and search for the only person who stands in that route.
4. Go to the man who is standing for the cave and talk to him. Now he will walk away and you can go further!


To-do list

- The maps must be more different, maby other trees etc.
- The overworlds are for now done, in the first beta I will fix the overworlds.
- The Titlescreen for no is 0% done. I'm gonna change the background and the text in a later stadium.
- Team Rocket? No not longer, there is a new team in this region: Team....
- And the normal stuff etc. etc. etc.

Credits

My credits going to all makers of tutorials and programs to make the hacks.

Downloads

Until now there are now downloads. Check every week for a new download!
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Old 19th January 2012, 06:34 PM   #2
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Im sure i have seen a pokemon mystery before.

I dont have much to judge lol but ill wait for some outdoor maps. Story is ohk, i meen is its very plain like greek yogurt but it can be tasty when you want it. So ill wait until the beta is out.
There will be a Alpha version for every gym. Tommorow I wil post the first Alpha version.
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Old 19th January 2012, 06:49 PM   #3
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It looks like you have the base for a hack. But, I do see some issues in the storyline. It seems like a generic storyline where you want to do something and you go to set out to do it and X team gets in the way, where it's up to you to do something. If a few twists to that were added, it'd make a much more interesting storyline. In fact, I'd recommend reading this tutorial and see what you have the power to add.

Now to critique the screenshots.


I assume you'll be fixing the logo? It looks out of place to have it white.


This map is awfully square. I assume you'll be fixing maps later on?
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Old 19th January 2012, 07:52 PM   #4
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The FAQ and screenshots sound like you haven't even edited any scripts, for example the lab is exactly the same as FR's lab, with different sprites.

To the right of the Pokemon there's a tile error. It looks a bit empty too.

Same with this screenshot, it looks empty.

Will you be changing the titlescreen more? The font looks out of place.
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Old 20th January 2012, 10:57 AM   #5
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BAD STUFF:

Ummm, nothing much to say about the story(meh, I suck at it too.), its still like FireRed, in many ways.. Why Team Rocket?.. You've change regions right? If you ought to do that, you might as well change the evil team/organization.

The OW looks like a recolored FR OW of Red.

Don't rely to much on Oak's script. It will not let you have your own story.. I think that the scripts, gives a hack its identity, and uniqueness.

Maps are quite edgy..(Like storymaking, I suck at this too. xD)

You should also change the background of the titlescreen to your liking.. The current one seems pretty strange to me..
LOL. Grilled-Deoxys. *ehem.. sorry about that.

Now for the GOOD STUFF:

I really like the this hack includes the availability of 4th Gen Pokemon.

I like the fact that you used my favorite line of starters.(Sinnoh Starters)

Cresselia's there! WOAH! xD xD

Deoxy's on the Title Screen.

That's all! Good luck fellow hacker! ^^ I'm looking forward to the beta! xD
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Old 20th January 2012, 12:18 PM   #6
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I fully agree to what the others are saying, but I like the idea of the hack and wish you luck~
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Old 20th January 2012, 01:12 PM   #7
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It looks like you have the base for a hack. But, I do see some issues in the storyline. It seems like a generic storyline where you want to do something and you go to set out to do it and X team gets in the way, where it's up to you to do something. If a few twists to that were added, it'd make a much more interesting storyline. In fact, I'd recommend reading this tutorial and see what you have the power to add.
My tutorial is helpful for general RPGs, and I hope it can help with a Pokémon Storyline. Try to take some traits from here such as comedy and romance.

From what I understand you aren't very adept at scripting, which hinders your ability.
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Old 20th January 2012, 07:17 PM   #8
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It's true what all of you said. I'm gonna make a to do list en I place it in my first post...

NOTE:
Yes, it's a new region, but the whole story start in Pallet Town! That's why the lab is the same as in Fire Red (ectually the whole first town is the same. After that everything is different from Fire Red).
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Old 20th January 2012, 08:31 PM   #9
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Okay! Glad to know that!
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Old 20th February 2014, 11:56 AM   #10
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the graphics are good but can u put all the pokemon??? 1st to 5th or 6th and the moves please organize it or u can go to pokemondb.net and also please put all the starters in the lab and please dont erase the upper part of pokemoncenter so we can trade thats all... and dont put alien pokemon that we dont want XD
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